Created
2025-02-24 16:50:36.997 -0600
Observation
The sun spills onto me, sinking into my skin as if life itself is kissing me. I do not move. I do not need to. Life has run through me, over me, filled me, and now I am simply here, wrapped in its fevered embrace, resting in its glow. It has been enough. More than enough. And in my hand, I hold it — the wellspring of life. I turn it between my fingers. I have bitten deep, and life still gives me more. Let them chase after meaning, I have found it.
Response 1
exaggerated is an overstatement. Sam should have gone even bigger
Response 2
each chapter better than the next. So good that as we approach the last few chapters we simply don't want it to end
Revision
I lay here, grateful for my realization. Eyes truly open. Now my life begins.
